TELEPORT US! - Rewarding Our Top Stories!

The excitement over LitReactor’s sci-fi writing challenge, Teleport Us!, has been building for months. More than a hundred writers showed up to the game and gave us their best science fiction. Each story received feedback and reviews, which we have tirelessly poured over to bring you the best of the best.
Last week we rewarded the amazing reviewers—the people who gave hours of their valuable time to help fellow writers with fantastic feedback and support.
And now it’s time to reward the authors for their writing. These top-rated stories will be receiving a story critique from some very talented people.
We want to give a special thanks to our reviewers for taking time to help out our aspiring writers.
Here are the winners (in no particular order):
- Alien Chemistry by thessilian - Adam Christopher
- Servants of the Last Man by TomMartinArt - Joseph Nassise
- Hiram Wakes by Sarah Cannon - Dana Fredsti
- The Human Argument by C Patrick Neagle - Chuck Wendig
- Of Flesh and Steel by Aaron Martin - John Joseph Adams
- Higher Minds by Phillip McCollum - Dana Fredsti
- Regulated Acts of Violence by Laura Keating - Joseph Nassise
- Ms. Ishmael's Box by 12thkey - Adam Christopher
- The Last Dance by GG Silverman - Dana Fredsti
- The Gorund by ender.che.13 - Alastair Reynolds
- Gizmo by lspieller - Kat Howard
- Call Me Tim by klahol - Lynne M Thomas
- Bug's Day at the Office by Jason Preu - Dana Fredsti
- Implant by ArlaneEnalra - Brenda Cooper
- Gravidism by Mess_Jess - Alastair Reynolds
- A Song for my Brother by Maria Stanislav - Joseph Nassise
- Our Masters by Fhhakansson - E. C. Myers
- Company by irennie - Lynne M Thomas
- The Sea Came by Linda - Kat Howard
- A Way Out by JC Piech - Chuck Wendig
- Xenophobe by Liam Hogan - Kat Howard
- Big Bang, Inc. by Sound - John Joseph Adams
- The Memory Remains by Adam Jenkins - Dana Fredsti
- Scrap. by Ben Sharp - Alastair Reynolds
- The iDo-30 Pact by Nathalie - Adam Christopher
- Affirmnation by Whammer - John Joseph Adams
- Corporate Person by scifiwriterguy - Brenda Cooper
- How to Lose Your Heart, Escape a Dying Planet, and Tell a Joke on Mars by Tim Needles - Alastair Reynolds
- Sustenance by Jerry L Mercer - Chuck Wendig
- The Space Bar by dufrescm - E. C. Myers
- Anomaly by Ethan Cooper - Alastair Reynolds
Congratulations to all our participants. Your reader will provide his or her feedback in the coming weeks. Expect to see feedback as a reply right on the actual story pages. Once all the feedback is in, we'll report back and link to all the results and see what our instructors had to say about these stories!
We hope everyone had fun, and based on many of the comments, that seems to be the case. This challenge has had some great moments.
Here's a little more about the amazing guest reviewers for Teleport Us!
Alastair Reynolds is a science fiction writer and former space scientist. He was born in Wales in 1966, worked for the European Space Agency in the Netherlands, and published his first SF short story in 1990. Since then he has published around fifty pieces of short fiction and ten novels, of which the most recent was Blue Remembered Earth (2012). Forthcoming is a sequel to Blue Remembered Earth, and a novel for BBC Books featuring Doctor Who in his third incarnation.
E. C. Myers was assembled from Korean and German parts in Yonkers, New York, where he was raised jointly by a mother and the public library. He is a graduate of the Clarion West Writers Workshop and a member of the prolific NYC writing group Altered Fluid. He is the author of Fair Coin and Quantum Coin. In the rare moments when he isn’t writing, he blogs about Star Trek at theviewscreen.com, plays video games, watches classic films and television, sleeps as little as possible, and spends too much time on the Internet.
Brenda Cooper is the author of The Creative Fire, (Book One of Ruby's Song), and the The Silver Ship series. Though not intended as a Young Adult novel, book 1, The Silver Ship and the Sea, was selected by Library Journal as one of the year's 100 Best Books for YA and by Booklist as one of the top ten 2007 adult books for youth to read. The other books in the series are Reading the Wind and Wings of Creation. She is the author of Mayan December and has collaborated with Larry Niven (Building Harlequin's Moon).
Chuck Wendig is the author of Blackbirds, Mockingbird, Double Dead, Bait Dog, and Dinocalypse Now. He currently has 178 more novels in development. His website contains a metric ton of writing advice, much of which will be collected and published by Writers Digest as The Kick-Ass Writer: 1001 Ways to Write Great Fiction, Get Published, and Earn Your Audience.
Adam Christopher is a novelist and Sir Julius Vogel Award-winning editor, and is the author of Empire State, Seven Wonders, and The Age Atomic from Angry Robot, and the forthcoming Shadow's Call from Tor Books. Adam’s fiction has appeared in Pantechnicon, Hub, and Dark Fiction Magazine, and when not writing he can be found drinking tea and obsessing over comics.
Kat Howard is a fiction writer, blogger, editor, and the instructor of our recurring sci-fi & fantasy class. Her short fiction has been performed on NPR as part of Selected Shorts, and has appeared in Lightspeed, Subterranean, and the anthology Stories, edited by Neil Gaiman and Al Sarrantonio. Her nonfiction has appeared on Tor.com, and is frequently on Fantasy-Matters.com, where she is also the content editor.
Joseph Nassise is the author of more than a dozen novels, including the internationally bestselling Templar Chronicles series. He also teaches courses at LitReactor on eBooks and urban fantasy. His work has been nominated for both the Bram Stoker Award and the International Horror Guild Award, and he served two terms as president of the Horror Writers Association.
Lynne M. Thomas is a two-time Hugo Award winner and co-editor of numerous sci-fi anthologies, including Chicks Dig Time Lords (2010) with Tara O’Shea, Whedonistas (2011) with Deborah Stanish, and Chicks Dig Comics (2012) with Sigrid Ellis. She's also the editor-in-chief of the Hugo Award-nominated Apex Magazine, an online professional prose and poetry magazine of science fiction, fantasy, horror, and mash-ups of all three.
Dana Fredsti is the author of Plague Town and Murder for Hire: The Peruvian Pigeon. A past president of the professional organization Sisters in Crime, she has also appeared in various zombie/horror movies projects, and she worked on Sam Raimi's Army of Darkness as an armourer's assistant, sword-fighting captain, and sword-fighting Deadite. You heard that right: She was a Deadite in Army of Darkness.
John Joseph Adams is the bestselling editor of many anthologies, such as Oz Reimagined, The Mad Scientist’s Guide to World Domination, Epic: Legends of Fantasy, and Other Worlds Than These. He is a six-time finalist for the Hugo Award and a four-time nominee for the World Fantasy Award. He is also the editor and publisher of the magazines Lightspeed and Nightmare, and is the co-host of Wired.com’s The Geek’s Guide to the Galaxy podcast.
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Thanks for the opportunity, and congrats to all these writers and their simply *amazing* stories! Looking forward to the next update to see the new reviews on each story!
*grinning ear to ear*
I'm really excited. This has been the best possible introduction to the site. It was a fantastic opportunity to try new things. I loved reading all the stories, getting excellent feedback, and everything.
I'm so pleased to see so many of my favorite stories on this list. Congratulations everyone!
*happy dance*
Holy hell, I was not expecting to make this list. I'm thrilled!
Yay hooray to all my WAR buddies who made it! Congrats to you all!!! *HUG!*
I'm over the moon! Thank you! *jumps and clicks heels*
Congratulations to everyone who took part, it's been such a cool event :D
Yay! I'm so excited to hear from Kat Howard. Thank you!!
Congrats everyone! There are some really great stories listed up there. I'll have to go back and read the ones I missed the first time around. Can't wait to read the feedback. ~Sam
Congratulations to all the winners! *swallows pill of bitter jealousy*
Already looking forward to the next Litreactor story event.
This has been a blast! I'm thrilled to see my story on the list, and equally thrilled to scan down and see that I'm on a list with so many of my personal faves. Thank you to everyone who read, rated and/or commented. Your feedback has been invaluable, and I'm still reading!
Congrats to *everyone* who participated. There were so many amazing stories, I can't imagine how difficult the reviewers' job was. Everyone, please keep writing. Your stories all impressed me so much!
Wow! That is one phenomenal collection of stories! Congrats to everyone who made the list! And a thanks to everyone who participated. Your works made for an intense 2 months of reading!
We are amused. Bring us another competition!
Congratulations to the winners and everyone else who participated! It has really been an enjoyable and successfull event.
Lovely, very much looking forward to Kat's review! Though heck, what next? 31 chosen stories, out of 160 odd original ones. I'm certainly going to read those that I missed, (fortunately not too many) but heck, competitive soul that I am, can we work out a top 10? A top 3? An overall winner? Will LitReactor be anthologising them? What did they do with the Scare Us stories? Or do we simply have to wait to until the next contest to begin again?
Answers on a postcard - or if more convenient, here! :)
Liam
Congratulations to all of you, very well deserved!
Big congratulations to all the winners!
Way to go, you guys! Great collection of stories there. Well done, all.
Humbled to be part of this list. What an awesome challenge. I can't wait for the next one!
Besides wishing he'd been included on the list (goes to cry), wish only one story per person would've won or been entered in the first place.
Blah - stupid double post
You know, it would be neat to update this when a particular story is reviewed :) Might be a little more work that warranted though ...
Congrats ladies and gents! Well done!
Of the four stories assigned to me, I've commented on The Gorund and Scrap, and I'm working on my comments for Gravidism, after which I'll do Anomaly. So far I haven't seen much reaction, but if anyone wants to chip in and discuss anything, I'm more than happy to come back.
Immensely grateful to Dana Fredsti for her lovely comment...going off to have a good cry now....
@GG_Silverman Indeed! A complete lack of critique is perhaps the best possible critique out there ;) And she gave it to you twice!
Now reviewed the stories I didn't do during the comp! Am going to sit back and think of my top three... :)
Congratulations! It's been fun, and I've met some new writers on this plane.
Keep it up! -- Cheers.
Got my review. Very curt. Very professional. Obviously a busy woman. I guess there's a difference getting a feedback from an author as opposed to an editor.
I've added a review of Gravidism.
By the way, can anyone give me a head's up on how to actually get to this page from the LitReactor homepage? I have a direct URL which takes me here, but if I end up anywhere else, I can't seem to navigate my way back to this area.
klahol, I was curious by your remarks so I checked her critique. I don't know how many other comments for recognized stories are like yours, but I sure wasn't impressed by this one.
All I can say is wow. Very unfortunate. I don't think that's the kind of response LR was hoping for the challenge winners to receive.
After all this time, all that effort on your part, your significant contributions to the event, you deserve better.
Just sayin'.
I realised that I'm down to do five stories, not four, so apologies for any confusion in my posts. 've done three and will get on with the final two over the next few days.
Alastair - if you go to your profile, and click on the "Track" button, it shows all the posts you've contributed to, so should get you back to any reviews you have done!
@Klahol, @Michael, at least your reviewer liked your work. I don't think mine did...
http://litreactor.com/events/teleport-us/xenophobe#new
Yes, Klahol, I think your review was quite positive!
I've only just seen this now (not quite sure how I missed it!) and am tickled. Also just recieved my feedback from Joseph Nassise. Concise and to the point. Not sure if the good author enjoyed it but was thankful for the critique, and the nod amongst other such talented folk. Always a pleasure.
Another please.
- LVK
GG, yeah, sure, it was positive. All ten words of it. If you check out the other reviews she did, you'll see that they are identical, apart from how they're phrased in the middle. I get that she's a professional editor and if she's curt, it is because time is an issue.
I guess is what I'm saying is that I'm not as much disapointed with my own review as in awe of the degree of input some reviewers put in.
Right now I'm taking Choreography of violence with John Skipp. His critique can be harsh, but never unconstructive. It's tough love in the best sense of the word.