ergoego
2nd chapter of a novel. Stan looks for forgiveness at a religious revival. Flashbacks at an army camp, on a raft in the MIssissippi, in San Francisco reveal how Stan developed guilt.
pinkpowR
Everyone knows that sex sells but a simple tease can be as lucrative without the psychological ramifications and physiological risk, right?
Dave Hanson
Chapter 6. Keltner tries not kill his recruiter. 2500 words.
R A Dilts
A terminally ill cancer patient and a brain damaged bookie with no short term memory plot to rob a corpse from below a bank in Times Square.
A love story.
Dave Hanson
Michael Keltner returns from Iraq to discover he's misplaced his empathy. He ends up on a strange journey through 'normal' life trying to find it. Sex, drugs, violence and morality.
jdudley
A reluctant soldier's first mission outside of his homeland.
Revised for a higher level of character development in the prologue and first chapter—hopefully!
J.S. Wright
A man's moments of reflection after spending the night in a stranger's hotel room, out in the middle of nowhere.
Michael Combs
A dark, yet playful comedy about an evangelical pastor who struggles with his faith and sexuality.
jdudley
Packs of wolf-like creatures invade the southeastern US. Who will fight them? Who will join them? More importantly: who controls them?
Typewriter Demigod
A girl goes to school dressed as a boy. Better than it sounds. About 4,000 words.
ergoego
"O Jesus" is the first chapter of a 42 chaptered novel. It sets the stage for the type of protagonist you're dealing with. It gives a hint of what his ambitions for his sons might be
Tripp C
The first 2 chapters of my book, Wild Oats. It's a somewhat fictional perspective on Generation-X. It's just under 5,000 words and I simply need to know if it draws the reader in. Criticism is loved
Liz
The first redrafted half one-act stage play, featuring a couple that have found themselves stuck in a strange place with no way of getting out and no memories to go on.
Felinoid
Gryt has an odd skin disease and other not too healthy things happen to him on a daily basis. The only healthy person/soul in his life disappears and he goes out looking for her.
Joseph_Falcone
Elliot, an 18 year old virgin struggles with the sexually active world around him. Does not feel comfortable enough with his new girlfriend, nor does he want his first time to be meaningless.
N.L. Vaught
Chapter four of my dystopian novel-in-progress. Alex stumbles upon an antique house. He feels the owners may be able to help him find the runaway he admires.
EricWojo
Fertility problems abound between the narrator and his wife, Darcy. To conceive, Darcy goes to extended lengths to have a baby.
fummeltunte
Roland is bent on offing himself, angsting it up in his apartment before he works up the nerve. A kid named Donovan is bored in the suburbs and decides to go for a late night walk.
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