MarcDRegan
In: Short Story 5 reviews
8 year-old Gil Carter tries to hide a gym bag of transgression but in the end he is found out.
Flaminia Ferina
In: Short Story 5 reviews
A young immigrant girl tells about her friend's mental disorder, but her detachment is soon to be deluded. 2800 words.
BludgeonBob
In: Short Story 9 reviews
A parallel of past and present.
Hetch Litman
In: Short Story 10 reviews
750 word short story. Prompt; Young love
rmalis
In: Short Story 4 reviews
Second draft of Hot-Spooned.
Dave Reuss
In: Short Story 8 reviews
1,100 words - still a shortie.
Chester Pane
In: Short Story 4 reviews
A girl disappears from a high school and a boy is afraid to come forward.
bryanhowie
In: Short Story 10 reviews
This story is finished. No need for further critiques. A man with very little memory seeks warmth, but has a flash of the traumatic incident that started it all. 3,100 words.
Nick Wilczynski
In: Short Story 3 reviews
Conversation at a Hanging, Second Revision. 3,663 words. Thank you to everyone who contributed to the first two drafts, for real, it was invaluable.
Daniel Packer
In: Short Story 6 reviews
A meta-fiction piece. Written as part of a course.
rgreenhill
In: Short Story 3 reviews
A young man begins a descent towards madness as a result of his unpleasant flatmate.
Dave Reuss
In: Short Story 7 reviews
Character A and Character B are having tea together. There's also an 800 pound gorilla in the room. They can not directly say anything about the 800 pound gorilla.
Instag8r
In: Short Story 9 reviews
Revised draft of BUG for Beyond Thunderdome Battle.
Liana
In: Short Story 4 reviews
Prompt: at a radio station, someone calls and keeps wanting to talk to the DJ. What is the connection between them? Why is he calling?
Dave Hanson
In: Short Story 5 reviews
A brash young man finds out he loses his mother on his birthday. 2,800 words
jonny parry
In: Short Story 3 reviews
A story about isolation, and the lengths we can stretch ourselves to in order to feel accepted.
Elle Lassiter
In: Short Story 8 reviews
A depressed woman searches for her childhood home in hopes of finding her lost happiness. About 2300 words
Nick Wilczynski
In: Short Story 5 reviews
Conversation at a Hanging v2. 2,717 Words. Thanks to everyone who helped with the first draft.
Instag8r
In: Short Story 7 reviews
Prompt: Dirty old men need love too.
ThoughtGoblin
In: Short Story 3 reviews
Two days after a major battle, soldiers are dealing with the stresses of life on the front.
aliensoul77
In: Short Story 5 reviews
A story I'm working on for the anthology I'm putting together. I picked OCD as my mental illness and ran with it. Hopefully y'all will like it better than my last story.
Liana
In: Short Story 4 reviews
A man who hanged himself wakes up in a swamp, knowing there is something he wasn't supposed to lose. A strange man prods him to look for whatever it was that he lost.
Dave Hanson
In: Short Story 5 reviews
A brash young executive learns that his mother had died and he has to eat cake. 2,200 words.
Philippe Besnier
In: Short Story 6 reviews
I slug an autistic person. (2000 words)
misskokamon
In: Short Story 7 reviews
The main character's mother dies on their birthday. And you must have a cake.